BR: 1-18 The Willow Pattern Plot

Kim and Chang began to ran, but the guards saw them. "Stop them!" shouted Kim Shee's father. Nadim and Chip threw the lemons at the guards. Chang and Kim Shee ran over the bridge. The guards chased after them. Biff got ready. "I hope Kim's sash is strong!" she said. The guards ran onto the bridge. Biff pulled the sash tight. The guards tripped over it. They fell over with a crash.

Today I read The Willow Pattern Plot.  The Willow Pattern Plot is book in the Oxford Reading Tree series. This is the story about a plate.
Biff and Chip were at a car boot sale. They saw Nadim. Nadim had bought a blue and white plate. This plate is called a willow pattern plate. After they play in the Biff's bedroom. Suddenly the magic key began to glow. This is the sign to start the adventure. The magic took them a strange place. Everything looks blue and white. They were in a big garden. A girl sat down in the garden. She looks like sad. She had a cruel father. Her name is Kim Shee. Kim loved a boy called Chang. She wanted to marry him. But her father don't allow the marry. Then, Chang appeared there. Kim and Chang found the children in the garden. They wanted to help Kim and Chang. The children told them an idea to help them. Nadim and Chip climbed into lemon tree and Biff tied Kim's sash to the bridge. Then some guards came to there. Chang and Kim ran over the bridge. The guards chased after them. Biff got ready. Biff pulled the sash tight. They fell over with a crash. Nadim and Chip threw the lemon at the guards. Chang and Kim have got away. Then the magic key began to glow. This is the sign to end the adventure. The children could come back to Biff's bedroom.
I don't like this story. Because this story is not interesting. I want to read much exciting story.


Hunt, R & Brychat, A. (2003). The Willpow Pattern Plot. Oxford University press. 349/9822